Give me forgetfulness,
So, I strive hard to remember
All I have forgot,
The pains and the aches
That haunts me again and again,
And reach to that summit where I can’t remember myself,
Is this me or some one else?!
Give me ambiguity,
So I daze where to go?
And where not to!
All the ways may lead to you,
Belief or a hope…
And Find it tough to distinguish,
Is it ambiguity or something else?!
Give me a disorder,
In no order I would look proper,
The flaws and the faults,
Would make me learn
And cross the fern and transcend,
Surmount, surpass and retrospect,
Still, something is missing!
6 comments:
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Viny, This is awesome kano. NIce placing of the words and it serves the purpose. Great kano..
-Ramya.
You Have started nicely which makes the entire poem goes in a good pace. Very nice usage of words in between and it is very apparent.
Good work.
Regards,
Bhavya.
Like a song from a broken heart?
Still looking forward to being where we were..
Good thought..
Nice thought vinay, heart touching poem it is
Poem is really good n meaningful... why dont u try to publish in magazines r newspapers...
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